Psychological illnesses may not be as obvious as physical disabilities or illnesses, nevertheless they are just as disabling in their own way. Society, however, is more accepting of those with physical than psychological illness or disabilities.
To what extent do you agree or disagree
At present, although the mental illness and physical disabilities are equally treated in the society, there are some beliefs show that psychological problems are less likely to be accepted in the public than physical disorders which gain more clearly attention. I quite disagree to this statement because of some reasons which will be discussed in the following essay.
To begin with, the first primary factor to consider is that the various communities have been overwhelmingly understanding the nature of mental disorders. This is because a large number of nervous-breakdown patients are significantly increase owing to the chaotic environment, and those suffers inevitably become ourselves or intimate companions. Moreover, it is more popular in many platform of social media and in television that it can be clearly figured out this problem and care more about it. Thus, this caused the fear in the public about how scary from being a victim of mental issues and empathize for many nonphysical cases, such as depression among us.
On the other hand, there are many growth that can change the dangerous of physical illness. The facilities in nowadays life have been developed, such as the appearance of technology and new materials, and it somehow reduce the difficulties in physical disabilities treatment. However, this development is one of the reasons increase the number of cases of psychological problem, for instance, people who are addicted in technology device might have some inner issues in future. Furthermore, in some countries, organizations offering job position to people with physical disabilities are slowly appearing. For example, many job centers for those people are being built in many cities and some companies accept them to be employees, while there are some fright when psychological illness is mentioned in employment.
In conclusion, I cannot agree with the given scenario. If ministries and the public have still ignored this inequality, incapacitated individuals can be hopeless. Therefore, the governments need to create effective measures for feasible approaches in order to promote the well-being of disabling communities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: increased
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Suggestion: many growths
...among us. On the other hand, there are many growth that can change the dangerous of physic...
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Suggestion: nowadays
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Suggestion: reduces
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Suggestion: in the future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1831.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4984984985 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08392764325 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576576576577 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2535029584 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.785714286 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7857142857 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9285714286 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239945266909 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749538450252 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763483485828 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146176035777 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080222141485 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.