Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born.
What might be the reasons for this?
What are the advantages and disadvantages?
There are few people who have lived most of their lives close to the cities where they were born. In this essay, I will discuss two main reasons why one would choose to stay close including in-depth knowledge of the city and the possibility of helping old parents whenever required. Although there are big advantages like emotional and financial support from family and relatives, there are also a few disadvantages that one might face including lack of exposure and high dependency on parents.
People who have been living long enough in the same city know it really well. They are aware of all the happening places nearby. For example, the best restaurant to eat at, affordable markets to go shopping, etc. Additionally, in case of an emergency, they can reach their families and friends in no time. For instance, last summer my friend's father had a heart attack and fortunately, he could reach the hospital in time to see him off in the operation theatre. These are a few of many reasons why one would settle where they grew up.
There are also great advantages to this situation including having emotional and financial support from family, relatives and friends. Festival season is one of the times when people living far away miss their homes and loved ones. It feels lonely and depressing being by yourself. Therefore, those who live in the same city enjoy the perks of being close to everybody. Furthermore, the financial burden can is decreased as everything required in life, more or less, is provided for. For example, there is no need to construct a new house while a parental or ancestral property is already built. Both these factors serve as big advantages if one lives in their native place.
However, staying in the same area maximum of your life would take away the chance to explore new cities, cultures, cuisines and the possibility to make new friends. When in a foreign place, one needs to push themselves out of their comfort zone and do things which they would not do otherwise. Not being able to do these things have huge disadvantages on its own.
In conclusion, knowing the area very well and being able to help their old parents in times of emergency are the main reasons one might choose to live nearby their birth-place. Though one might get emotional and financial stability in this scenario, there is a downside to this of not having the opportunity to experience new places and cultures because of which they will not be able to push their limits and further grow in life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 409, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
.... Furthermore, the financial burden can is decreased as everything required in lif...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, really, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2084.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 434.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80184331797 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52637134808 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536866359447 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 666.9 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3740490842 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2380952381 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.80952380952 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313739594857 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905461032504 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0891409629499 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177184559941 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768510116079 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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