Some people think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of put behind bars,
To what extent do you agree?
There is a prevalent idea among a segment of society that imprisonment is better be substituted with unwaged work for some offenders. I am a firm believer of the notion that such a replacement of sentence should be favored.
To begin with, criminals that commit offences due to financial burden should be forced to work for free, as this experience will both be punishment and rehabilitation for them. Generally, some jobless people are obliged to get involved with the crime activities such as shoplifting and robbery because they have failed to be accepted to the series of workplaces. This may be either because of their lack of skills in certain jobs, which they have not been able to find a chance to develop, or tendency toward illegal behaviours. That is why offenders may sharpen required skills by doing a particular job, which will not only rehabilitate them but also enhance their career prospects.
Regarding the second fact, prison is detrimental to inmate's future since their psychologies rather break down under such conditions. In other words, being surrounded by different types of prisoners will potentially affect a certain person's way of thinking by inducing it to the violence. As a result, after getting released from jail, he or she is more likely to repeat criminal activities. Moreover, the new case can be even harsher than former one because of having communicated with high-level offenders.
To conclude, it is suggested to replace the prisons with free work for some culprits. I am a strong advocate of the idea that using prisoners as workforce can be beneficial, as the probability of future crimes will decrease.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, so, such as, as a result, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08088235294 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86948470532 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636029411765 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5193943822 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.166666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180246441448 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636322036338 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034173339121 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109011293632 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0145734446427 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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