In some countries young people are not only richer, but also safer and healthier than ever before. However, they are often less happy. What do you think are the reasons for this and what can be done to help?
It is true that in several parts of the world, particularly in developed countries, the youth of today enjoy wealthier lives and better health, but are not necessarily happier, despite all the material possessions they hold. I would argue that there is one principal reason can explain for this situation, and some steps should be taken to deal with this issue.
The influence of social media is at the root of the dissatisfaction of today’s youngsters. "Peer pressure" is a word that people hear a lot recently; it is the stress stemmed from seeing friends' pictures and posts about their successful achievements, a huge sum, fancy trips or stays in luxurious hotel and feel inferior to them. This is a serious hurt to the youth's big ego, as they may consider themselves to be weak, worthless and bear a stress that they must strive to reach high peaks set by their peers. Besides, spending a great deal of time gluing eyes on mobile phone also deprives youngsters of interacting with other people. Face-to-face conversation, touches and embraces are miraculous source of comfort and encouragement that make human happy. Hence, failure to maintain direct contact with surrounding people also leads to a less satisfied life.
There are, indeed, a solution to this worrying problem and it derives from the inner mind of each person. The most important point is young people should bear in mind that everyone has his or her own pace and distinct definition of success as well as happiness. They should stick to their own paths and goals, then attempt to be an improved version of themselves to meet those objectives rather than to compare with their mates and try to achieve the same triumphs. Spending less time on social media to take conversation with family members is also a great help, as one can stay away from toxic environment on the Internet and receive more love as well as motivation to feel more confident in life.
In conclusion, young people can mitigate the negative effects of social media on their life by setting their own targets to reach instead of comparing with other friends, as well as seeking talks and support from their beloved ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, may, so, then, well, in conclusion, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1806.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90760869565 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67316178913 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600543478261 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.4131684375 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.923076923 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3076923077 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146778040035 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481631566646 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425460467678 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0888307831118 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279965386286 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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