The number of people interested in cosmetic surgery is increasing in order to improve their physical appearance Why do people do operations to change the way they look Do you think it is a positive or negative development
Technology in healthcare, medical, anesthetic, sense of fulfilling, implementation of surgery to enhance one’s look has become increasingly popular. In my opinion, there are two main factors behind this phenomenon and its impacts depend on certain contexts which will be discussed below.
The first point in support of involvement of operation to adjust ones’ appearance is that it provides those with a sense of fulfillment. Social judgement of either beauty or anesthetic are the main culprits of the movement which tend to influence perceptions of people to themselves. Those who are considered good-looking maybe deemed as more privileged and present higher social status compared to their unlucky counterparts. This subsequently lead to the surge of people craving for improvement of their appearances and application of medical operation technique is one of viable alternatives.
An additional point in support of cosmetic surgery is that the advancements in the industry over the course of time has enabled safer and more effective operations to carry out on human. To illustrate, technology such as modern implant would produce better results with less pain and side-effects. After operations, people are more likely to be taken care better thanks to the high quality medicines and medical condition for the time being. Likewise, interference of state-of-the-art equipment contributes significantly to the success of these surgeries.
Given these afore-mentioned facts, it is easier than ever to have adjustment surgeries. However, people fathom carefully their financial and medical condition before receiving any critical changes to their bodies.
In sum, the popularity of cosmetic surgeries could be attributed to the development of medical technology and the public views on individuals. The impact of this has both merits and drawbacks, which rest on each personal conditions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, likewise, look, may, so, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66315789474 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19871088223 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628070175439 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.5019252285 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 115.285714286 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158729000018 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478802428081 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449878221666 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0781296957598 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330344075863 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.34 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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