Some people believe that newspaper is the best way to learn about news. While others believe that a more effective way is through other media. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It would be argued by some that the best way to learn something new is reading the newspaper. In my opinion, however, learning through media is more efficient.
On the one hand they are a number of reasons why some believe that reading newspaper is better than others. The first reason is that newspaper provides reliable informations and readers are not distracted by advertisements. Before publish, almost journals has been thoroughly examined and edited to ensure that content is truthworthy. So the reader who read daily paper can’t believe in authentication what they read. In contrast, the information on social media such as Facebook, Instagram, Twitter may be wrong because there are few rule about what Internet user can post on the this pages. Moreover, users could be distracted by the content which just serve for marketing purpose and the most valuable informations are buried under a heap of ads.
On the other hand, I would side with those who believe that the modern form of media are better way to gained new knowledge.Firstly, television, social media are superior to conventional newspaper in terms of updatability. Rather than waiting for a day or more, Internet users and TV watchers could be updated the news in a matter of minutes. Secondly, easy access is one of the advantage of social media over traditional papers. With the widespread of the Internet, people with technology devices such a smart phones, laptops can access a huge storage of news in just a few click.
To sum up, although some people believe that printed newspaper is the best way to receive the news, I personally believe that using other media is better.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun rule seems to be countable; consider using: 'few rules'.
Suggestion: few rules
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Message: Maybe you need to remove the second determiner so that only 'the' or 'this' is left.
Suggestion: the; this
...le about what Internet user can post on the this pages. Moreover, users could be distrac...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ations are buried under a heap of ads. On the other hand, I would side with tho...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Firstly
... are better way to gained new knowledge.Firstly, television, social media are superior ...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun click seems to be countable; consider using: 'few clicks'.
Suggestion: few clicks
...access a huge storage of news in just a few click. To sum up, although some people belie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, in contrast, such as, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98194945848 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81716623609 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584837545126 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8694787935 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.153846154 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2307692308 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306949743908 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102909316506 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111908361216 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230802511311 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12119920994 0.056905535591 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.