The average standard of people’s health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Together with the development of medicine, human's health and longevity have been improved significantly compared to our ancestors in the past. However, there are a good few ideas indicate that there is a high chance people's health standard on average will decrease in the future. I personally oppose to that notion and I believe that the standard regarding human's well-being will even rise in the future for several reasons.
Firstly, the big leap in medical science has been raising people's health standard. Several incurable diseases before has now been addressed by the advanced technology and drugs. Take the recent pandemic of Covid-19, which has brought death to millions of people across the world, as an example. Scientists have been working against the clock to research and produce a vaccine preventing the symptoms of people diagnosed with Corona virus from turning severe. This has lit a hope for human beings that they are protected and can be treated to recovery from numerous ailments, therefore has enhanced their health standard.
Secondly, beside physical health, mental health is also receiving more attention. As physical health is improved, longevity is extended, people are currently having time to take interest in mental health, an essential part of a human's well-being that has not been properly noticed in the previous years. Depression are now seriously faced and considered a mental illness, not described as "crazy", "psycho" or "autistic" as before. When mental health receives the attention it deserves, people can be healthy completely and as a result, the conception of health standard will be upgraded to a next level.
In conclusion, despite some opinions that the average health standard of people is possibly lower in coming years, I believe that is not the case. On the contrary, health standard among human beings will even upturn, given the innovation of medical science and decent care for mental health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 316, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36977491961 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91254438172 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565916398714 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3209193671 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.285714286 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262624976691 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967870370296 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501127253485 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171065998691 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215409236349 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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