The issue of gay marriage remains controversial. Some people think that this trend has adverse effects on the society while others believe that it is seen as a natural trend and right for people to choose this type of marriage. Should gay marriage be legal?
Being at the modern and developing era, gay marriage has been a controversial topic since the last decades. While it can be seen as a natural trend and right of the people to choose this type of marriage, many others claim it has some certain adverse effects towards the society. Personally, I completely suppose that this trend will defimitly benefit the society. And, this essay below will explain and state more about my points of view.
To begin with, gay marriage has caused emotional conflicts between supporters and non-supporters. In fact, having supports from the community, it is clear that gay persons will have more opportunities to make friends and find suitable partners leading to a happy life. If being able to live as their true themselves, they could be more productive and happier, that would eventually be beneficial for themselves and the society. For instance, when the two same genders come to creat a happy life together, they two can share, care or support to each other to be more perfect in both career and successful path. As for that result, many people advise others to choose the best thing in their journey life without having more pressures about gender-picking suitably as nature.
Moreover, there are many a point which states that choosing the person who wants to share life with is one of the most important decisions that any of people have to make. There is not a true belief about the traditions or customs, because they have been handed down for many generations with the mondernized and civilized development. Through the certain observations and analysis, when people find that anything can be agreed with conductive reasons for the good and beneficial to the society, they could consider to accept and live up to.
In conclusion, it would be beneficial for the whole community to support gay marriage and it should be made legal to enforce the people’s right to choose. As for all the mentioned benefits above, I strongly admit that gay marriage can be considered to put in legal for all the good.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 508, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'consider accepting'.
Suggestion: consider accepting
...d beneficial to the society, they could consider to accept and live up to. In conclusion, it woul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, while, as for, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89913544669 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64311166044 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553314121037 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4004809706 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.428571429 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7857142857 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348778423101 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121693408119 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104695574448 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229214517963 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130772590551 0.056905535591 230% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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