Fossil fuel is the main source of energy. In some countries, the use of alternative sources of energy is encouraged. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Energy now plays an important role in the development of industries. With the availability of fossil fuel, many countries are almost relying on this source. However, in some countries, the use of renewable energy is promoted to reduce pressure on the current main source. From my perspective, the merits outweigh the drawbacks.
To begin with, using alternative sources of energy will lessen the negative impact on the environment. Due to the fact that fossil fuel is an indispensable element in different heavy industries, it is also the main cause of pollution to the environment. Therefore, promoting the use of renewable energy will contribute to environmental protection greatly. For example, many countries offer a lot of policies to raise people’s awareness by encouraging them to use electric cars, which can mitigate a considerable amount of emissions from traditional cars. Furthermore, fossil fuel is non-renewable energy, but we make full use of this source severely. Renewable resources such as solar energy are the best solution to deal with this problem because they can be utilized again and again, and are pretty eco-friendly.
Despite the benefits, there are several issues about alternative energy resources that need to be addressed. The disadvantage is the high cost of factories’ construction. This is often the case of solar panels that are quite expensive to produce because making from rare and special materials. Moreover, the technology uses to store this kind of energy has to consider thoroughly. Besides, some energy depends on weather conditions and geographical locations like geothermal. According to the report, not only a few places can be ideal to operate its system, but also demands qualified workers.
In conclusion, it can be said that fossil fuel should be replaced by alternative ways as they are non-renewable and pollutes the environment. In my opinion, I believe it is worthwhile to use renewable energy because they are sustainable and environmentally friendly.
- Topic The chart below shows the percentages of five kinds of magazines sold by a company in the UK between 2001 and 2009 73
- Topic Some people argue that we should do research into our family history Others agree with the view that we should focus on the present and future generations 70
- Topic Some people believe that a crime is a result of social problems and poverty others think that crime is a result of bad person s nature Discuss both views and give your opinion 89
- Topic The charts below show the performance of spending on roads and transport in four countries from 1990 to 2005 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant 84
- Topic Some people argue that we should do research into our family history Others agree with the view that we should focus on the present and future generations 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42222222222 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1502302483 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580952380952 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4465777832 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8888888889 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327254453714 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0974690401829 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600851250389 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191327795716 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586921611459 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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