Inventors are not as important to society as doctors. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
In the modern world, most inventions have been created by inventors and become more and more convenient for our humans. As doctors, they help patients when they get ill. Both of them are important to our daily life. Although it seems to be in different ways.
Inventors have had an enormous impact on our lives. Many years ago, the scientists like Nicholas Tesla or Thomas Edison, created electricity, televisions, lights, and other electric products. And so on to our generation, we transformed them into the things that we cannot live without.
In contrast, doctors are really important to our lives as well. They are the ones who save us from sickness. If we get ill, we will come to the hospital and meet doctors. They will give us medicine to release the pain or illness. Also, it is the place where cures patients and doctors help them to get over their sicknesses.
Although we cannot live without doctors, also we cannot live without inventors. Both are going together. Doctors use the inventions of the inventors to cure illness and contrast.
In summary, I think doctors and inventors are equally important. They rely on each other, and we also depend on them. So it is impossible to say that they are unnecessary for our lives.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 217, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...f them are important to our daily life. Although it seems to be in different ways. In...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, well, i think, in contrast, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1039.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 214.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85514018692 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56484170307 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584112149533 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7891643329 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 57.7222222222 106.682146367 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.8888888889 20.7667163134 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0823559582166 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0324410601371 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047662090501 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0511962253889 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0147338001215 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 50.2224549098 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.02 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 217, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...f them are important to our daily life. Although it seems to be in different ways. In...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, well, i think, in contrast, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1039.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 214.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85514018692 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56484170307 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584112149533 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7891643329 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 57.7222222222 106.682146367 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.8888888889 20.7667163134 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0823559582166 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0324410601371 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047662090501 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0511962253889 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0147338001215 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 50.2224549098 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.02 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.