Many people go to university for academic study. More people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Most people now find the idea of attending college to better their education to be enticing. Although obtaining a higher education is advantageous, there is now a growing issue that our society is in desperate need of skilled personnel like electricians and plumbers. In light of this, I believe that more people should be encouraged to participate in vocational training for the reasons listed below.
Firstly, encouraging more people to pursue a profession in a certain field could help alleviate some of our worries about graduate unemployment. Due to fierce job competition, there would be fewer employment options available for everyone given the high number of persons enrolling in institutions for academic study. Therefore, this may lead to a higher unemployment rate, which may then become the root of many societal problems. However, this seems not to be the case once more people choose a vocational career. By doing this, society as a whole would be relieved from the heavy burden of unemployment, giving people greater opportunities to choose their careers. When it comes to building construction or site upkeep, jobs like electricians and other trades are also essential. In many countries, a permanent maintenance staff or skilled tradesmen is employed in hospitals, schools or museums, ensuring the safety of all who use the buildings.
More vocational training should be offered to meet demand for the two aforementioned reasons. To ensure that students are well-prepared with the primary skills needed for some emergent scenarios, such as a fire, schools should incorporate more practical teachings into their curricula in addition to teaching students about abstract theories. Parents must also encourage their kids to think about acquiring a skilled trade as a viable alternative to attending college in order to assist them plan their future careers.
To sum up, while pursuing higher education at a university is undoubtedly useful, it is also necessary to encourage people to pursue vocational training in order to keep the balance in our society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he safety of all who use the buildings. More vocational training should be offer...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, may, so, then, therefore, well, while, in addition, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36697247706 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98294804394 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599388379205 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4529101915 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.357142857 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3571428571 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271030903489 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922790232607 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710374217222 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15693431494 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343000350348 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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