Different people have different approaches to life. Some prefer daily routines while others enjoy having new experiences. Which category do you fall into and why?
In the current era, it has been believed that the standard of living will depend on how people enjoy and adapt with. Inside that, some could choose the way of seeking for new experiences, whilst others want to stay and keep the on-going every-day routines. To my personal perspectives, I suppose that exploiting something new is better than daily happenings without changing. And, this essay below will explain somehow the enjoyment towards new experiences with specific clues.
First and foremost, preferring the daily routines can help people maintain their habits for a long time and get used to it. Moreover, the daily life tasks could protect people to stay out troubles or negative impacts in their life. Also, reducing the risks by doing the casual work could be still needed nowadays; in fact, with these people, learning new things is a waste for their time, and partly having chance for being in difficulty. And, preparing or forecasting the risks for what it could bring is the skill people need in life, obviously that is a difficully lackable matter for some of them.
In reverse, to my supports, gaining the new experiences is better for the community where all are living in. In fact, thank to humanity’s knowledge, the society has been more developed than ever before. In the past, many people have learnt many new experiences from many new places. They accepted the risks and enjoyed these as a part of life. For example, before hiking to the mountains, they accepted that they could be hurt by the environment, however, they learned many things about many animals’ activities in this atmosphere. As a result, they could get improvement and enhancement in the values of current living.
In conclusion, to my personal thoughts, finding something new is the way people can enjoy their life. And, with all those mentioned above, enjoy the life in looking new experiences is what people meant to be. Since, doing that will be the good points to motivate the society on growing up firmly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, moreover, so, still, for example, i suppose, in conclusion, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1676.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95857988166 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54311926997 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550295857988 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.76152304609 273% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0873839525 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5882352941 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8823529412 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58823529412 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216527234675 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716692534334 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455161995803 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136159705592 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251061230673 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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