30.1.16 Prison is the common way in most countries to solve the problems of crime. However, a more effective solution is to provide people with a better education. To what extent do yo agree or disagree?
These days, the crime rate has been increasing all over the world, due to many aspects of our lives. Although some argue that prison is the best way in dealing with offenders, I completely agree with those who believe that providing better education for people is a more effective solution.
On the one hand, prison is effective in dealing with offenders. The reason relates to concerning the safety of the community and the punishment of the guilty. When the crime is arrested and put in prison, they just realized that their actions are illegal and extremely dangerous to the community. For instance, murderers are sentenced to a plethora of years in jail because of their behaviors. As the result, they will face the loss of freedom, social isolation, and disconnection from their families and friends, relationships, and societies. Therefore, residents are provided with a safe environment, and children are not affected by the bad guy.
On the other hand, I believe that education for people would be a workable solution to tackle crime. The first reason is providing a qualified education can help them have chances to offer a well-paid job in the future. It can be seen that most crimes are the jobless, and the lack of finances so having stable work makes them able to pay for all costs and satisfy their needs. Furthermore, everybody in the world must be treated equally and given all human rights such as respect, and opportunities.
To sum up, I strongly believe that the importance of morality and education is much more effective than punishment at stopping crime. Hence, I argue that education is better than imprisonment as a tool for crime reduction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...ed by the bad guy. On the other hand, I believe that education for people would ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, well, for instance, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94306049822 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76369291087 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583629893238 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.531082818 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2142857143 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0714285714 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234985887589 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738171930175 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762943278321 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144462895983 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607504236362 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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