Fossil fuels (coal, oil and natural gas) are the main sources in many countries.
However, in some countries, the use of alternative sources of energy (wind
and solar energy) are encouraged. Do you think it is a positive or negative
development?
It is true that nowadays, while in many countries fossil fuels are still the most popular energy sources, some developed countries encourage people to consume renewable energy like solar or wind instead of. Although using this finite energy has several drawbacks, the beneficial effects of it may be far more significant.
On the one hand, there can be some minor disadvantages of using solar power. Chief among these is that the citizens installing alternate energy devices can put a financial burden on their families because these technologies are very expensive so buying and developing solar panels can cost a lot of money and time. The second issue is that these solar panels depend on weather conditions, therefore, if there is bad weather, these devices can not work efficiently. However, I think that this is just a short term, if the panels are finished, these devices can help customers to save money on electricity bills.
Nevertheless, consuming alternate sources can have major advantages which overshadow these detrimental impacts. Another worth mentioning is that using solar energy sources allows citizens to ease air pollution. This is because these technologies do not discharge the exhausted fumes as well as pollutants like fossil fuels thereby reducing the amount of CO2 to the environment and improving the air quality. The second point is that The users are able to pay less money on electricity bills by using solar energy devices. This result from panels energy absorbing solar energy to provide electricity thereby can reduce the amount of electricity that is used by customers, therefore, can help them to save money on electricity bills.
In conclusion, despite the potential downsides of using sustainable energy sources, the benefits brought about are of greater importance
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 42, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...It is true that nowadays, while in many countries fossil fuels are still the most popular...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, still, therefore, well, while, i think, in conclusion, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30662020906 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76469803433 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560975609756 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0592045956 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.916666667 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0833333333 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276630444499 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104510643967 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844796853981 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171204837143 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0993933491944 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.