Young people who commit crimes should be treated in the same way as adults who commit crimes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that young criminals should be similarly prosecuted as mature ones. From my perspective, I firmly believe that there should not be the same way to punish the young committing crimes as adults do
On the one hand, it could be unfair if children with a lack of moral capacity and thorough understanding of the world and consequences are condemned similarly to adults. Being deficient in management of control poses a higher possibility of illegal acts committed by the young mind. In specific circumstances, a majority of grown-ups have the ability to stop themselves but younger ones, once instigated, may act on impulse and cause regret. Instead of being sentenced to years of incarceration, young offenders should be given an opportunity to correct the mistakes that are made because of ignorance and loss of control at the minute moments
Since young people might take the advantage of lenient laws for treating juvenile offenders, there are numerous different ways to treat young lawbreakers. To begin with, adolescents committing crimes on impulse with full regret should be given leeway and an opportunity to rehabilitate. With the young mind, it is likely easier to educate them as a way to avoid the same wrongdoings in the future. In addition, for juvenile offenders with meticulous plans to commit crimes posing a threat to society, punishment must always be proportionate to the gravity of the crime and the age of the offender should be a minor factor that affects their consideration.
In conclusion, although many people tend to think that adolescents should be treated the same as grown people, others feel that the underdevelopment of their cognitive skills and lack of experience can be the major reasons to avoid any sentences. Personally, it would be unreasonable to punish juvenile criminals equally as matured ones due to ignorance or angst.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'numerous'.
Suggestion: numerous
... treating juvenile offenders, there are numerous different ways to treat young lawbreakers. To beg...
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Line 4, column 314, Rule ID: EQUALLY_AS[1]
Message: Don't say 'equally as'. You can use either 'equally' or 'as' on its own. When comparing two nouns, use 'just as'.
Suggestion: equally; as; just as
...reasonable to punish juvenile criminals equally as matured ones due to ignorance or angst....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, similarly, so, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14379084967 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00966021245 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581699346405 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.2210618426 49.4020404114 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.4 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328712308183 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12694200443 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726346453188 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217567491622 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108110488029 0.056905535591 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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