Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
In the modern era where the development of technology is inevitable, there is still a trend that alternative medicines and treatments stand as the solution in the modern society. People nowadays have proper knowledge about medicine which proven than the old one. In my perspective, the proposal of using traditional medicines and treatments is good; however, this essay will explore both sides of this discussion.
First and foremost, people in my country have limited access to medical facilities such as a clinic, hospital and pharmacy, particularly in rural access. People tend to consult their health condition to their parents or even shamans in order to get solutions for their health their use an ancient receipt as medicine by utilizing special plants as the main ingredient. Furthermore, that solution support the other reason due to the budget of the service being cheaper compared to the modern one. Utilizing the special plant will reduce dramatically the expense because they could get it in their garden or even in the traditional market. Additionally, the shaman does not standardize the price of the service because they act as a charity and help.
The third reason is the story about their ancient generation that already rooted in their belief about medication are better than the other solution. For instance, in the Sundanese tribe, kids who get a fever should drink a special drink made of tea from the highest hill will recover the condition within one night. On the other hand, a research-based modern technology of medicines and treatments are more proven by supporting from a theoretical and empirical background. People who get modern treatment will be safer due to there being a standard operational procedure for all of the treatments and medicine such as taking a pill of paracetamol for influenza or fever disease.
In conclusion, the traditional ways of medicine and treatment still exist as the solution in rural area even though it frequently has a huge difference from modern ones.
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first, furthermore, however, if, so, still, third, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1737804878 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82563732262 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52743902439 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.1049546106 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.538461538 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2307692308 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170886446427 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598475841402 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488143636123 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106975019803 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049460918988 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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