Nowadays young people spend too much of their free time in shopping malls. Some people fear that this may have negative effects on young people and the society they live in.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In modern society, shopping malls have become the primary location for youngsters to spend their recreation time, especially in the metropolitan areas. However, some people have reservations about this phenomenon as it may endanger youngsters and pose several social issues to their society. As far as I am concerned, such an idea is potentially flawed owing to several reasons which will be demonstrated in the essay below.
To commence, the malls could serve as a form of stress relief therapy for the young in the current materialistic world. Young people now have to make great attempts to make ends meet and that might cause serious tensions in this group, consequently, the young community has a growing need to find a method to escape the unpleasant state of mind derived from life temporarily, and malls are the perfect solution for them. Young people can leave their troubles behind due to the numerous advantages that the malls offer. For instance, when people enter a shopping plaza, the cold air from the air conditioners might erase their frustrating feeling caused by the sweltering heat of Ho Chi Minh city.
Moreover, it is worth mentioning that the increasing expenditure of the young in shopping centers may pave a way for the positive development of the manufacturing branch and contribute to the wealth of the whole economy of a nation as well. A case in point is Gigamall in Thủ Đức district, which, despite being located in a distant suburban area, has since its opening increased the consumption of young people nearby and improved the economic situation of the neighborhood.
To sum up, I am of the opinion that the decision of the young to spend time in shopping malls is not entirely pointless because such places bring numerous advantages to both the young in particular and the economy in general.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, for instance, in general, in particular, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01960784314 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78287882263 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.2909303189 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.6 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310053427086 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117064130427 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589059127298 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169824369273 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391584537539 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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