Even though governments have worked hard to bring about improvements in the healthcare system, the overall standard of physical health in developed countries is decreasing. What are the potential reasons for this, and what are some of the long-term effects?
With the prospection of society, although the standard of living is becoming better and better in every aspect, especially the healthcare system, the general quality of physical health is witnessing a downward trend in rich countries. There are several reasons contributing to this problem, and this essay will shed light on some possible causes, as well as potential long-term effects.
Lifestyle choices play an important role in our lives and become the major factor leading to poor health status in developed nations. The fact is that the more hectic the pace of life is, the greater citizens pay attention to purchasing their goals. Therefore, consuming fast food due to its convenience gains much popularity among residents in order to save time. That is the reason why recently there are a boom in junk food restaurants and chains that has enticed people to eat at these establishments as a substitute for enjoying meals at home, McDonald's for example. In the long run, this unbalanced diet could get into a habit that is pretty challenging to break. In addition, stress is also a key element contributing to poor health in thriving countries. It is apparent that today employees are up to their eyes in tons of work to keep up with the fast-paced change in the competitive labor market. As a result, there is little to no time for them to eat nutritious meals or take care of themselves.
These life choices will have a long-lasting negative impact on both physical and mental health. Spending almost time devoted to their jobs without doing physical exercises may make them suffer from diabetes or obesity, resulting in several heart problems. Even worse, if the generation continues to partake in these unhealthy habits, they will continue in the generation to come. For instance, parents who have diabetes or are prone to obesity have a higher chance of passing these conditions on to their children. Furthermore, making matters serious they have to take meditation for the rest of their lives, and ultimately all these factors will put a strain on the workforce and health budget of the countries. According to a recent report, one of the healthcare experts in Europe has forecast in 2030, nearly 75% of people more than 30 years of age will be in long-term meditation for chronic diseases.
In conclusion, life choices are primary factors ranging from unbalanced diets to higher stress levels, contributing to poor health which decreases the standard of life in prosperous nations. In the near future, not only the government but also individuals should join hands to tackle this issue for health betterment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, well, as for, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 41.998997996 169% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2198.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 435.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05287356322 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73706520952 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 176.041082164 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579310344828 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 672.3 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8000826982 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.111111111 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216462268135 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584956844911 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433549009463 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130762447716 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421691089032 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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