Nowadays, many families have both parents working. Some working parents believe other family members like grandparents can take care of their children, while others think childcare centers provide the best care. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is true that parents have been overwhelmed by working and no longer have enough time to look after their own offspring recently. While some people believe that child-care organizations can offer good services for their children, I hold the opinion that family members such as grandparents will be a better idea to carry out this responsibility.
On the one hand, it should be noticed that child-care centers provide benefits. Firstly, child givers at those businesses are likely to get well-trained and specific knowledge in taking care of a child, helping them to exactly react in any situations. For example, when a baby is hurt, the staff in the center can quickly give them first aid. Secondly, youngsters coming to the organizations have more opportunities to make new friends and develop their communication and language abilities. If children are raised at home without interaction with their peers, they would feel a little lonely and isolated.
On the other hand, having other family members, particularly their grandparents, care for their babies is a wonderful choice. One of the reasons is that they tend to spend more time and effort carefully bringing their children up than any caregivers in the centers. For instance, grandparents with much experience in nurturing their own offspring are able to know how to calm a crying child down. Furthermore, such babies who are looked after by their relatives can become more family-oriented and appreciate the value of family happiness. As those children are full of worthy memories and fun with their family members, they tend to behave well and respect other people.
In conclusion, when it comes to taking care of children, sending babies to a center can have benefits such as professional employees and language and communication development of their offspring. However, I believe that their parents should think of other family members’ calmness due to strong bonds between their relatives and emotional growth of a child.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21495327103 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90311257375 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570093457944 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4369949663 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.571428571 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9285714286 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6428571429 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35898611875 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118972865484 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660714414756 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230967024405 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619286215341 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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