The only way to solve the increasing crime rate of young offenders is to teach parents better parenting skills. To what extent do you agree?
It has been stated that giving knowledge to parents about parenting skills is the best manner to overcome the number of crimes by the young generation. I personally agree with this statement which will be elucidated below.
To begin with, Bad or good behavior which is done by some children represents the education of their parents at the home; however, the neighborhood is one of the causes why kids act badly because whom children socialize with could shape their behavior. For instance, these days some youngsters in school still bully others who have poor mental health so it is able to make victims depressed so that they do not want to attend class. This bullying could happen inasmuch as one student who has bigger power influences a number of other students to bully the weaker. According to this, bad influence could affect children’s behaviour. Furthermore, the parents’ strictness could lead to sneaky children, which is more dangerous as they know how to lie and fool people. For example, the kids would often lie about anything to their parents in order that they are not scolded by their parents.
On the other hand, we should consider the positive that parenting skills like the way parents react something and deliver to children which are taught to parents can reduce juvenile delinquency because parents guide or educate their children to do good not only to their friends but also to elder people. A good illustration of this is parents give suggestion to their children that they will often help others such as helping the elderly go across the street so children can imitate it. Therefore, the young generation becomes a generation who is well-mannered and hospitable. Moreover, the children should gain wisdom about the law because the young generation is easier to get influenced by others. Also, they could attain knowledge from classes which are related to this subject. For example, the public security agency is invited by the headmaster to give lectures to young people. As a result, the young generation’s life would be more controlled and not easily affected by negative factors.
In conclusion, it seems to me that parenting skills which are taught to parents can reduce criminal behavior on young people so that children understand which things they could do. This is as long as parents still have control when children are out of home.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 7.30460921844 260% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1989.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 396.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02272727273 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5873513585 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527777777778 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.9 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.0163926605 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2941176471 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0588235294 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19395178001 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663356244625 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737659289457 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156193800597 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573694176211 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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