It is better to be unemployed in jobs rather than to be employed in jobs even if they don't feel happy or enjoy. Do you agree or disagree?
It is excelling on the dole than engaged in an occupation rather than being unhappy or unfulfilled in such a post. I completely agree with the statement because remaining in a monotonous job lack motivation and causes waste of time by becoming unproductive.
Motivation nowadays is a crucial factor to become fabulous in any task. Many people believe that positive inspiration help them to achieve the goal in simpler way implies that rather than wondering in unliked level, it is for a far better to stay unemployed. For illustration, in 1985, Steve Jobs, cofounder of the Apple left the position of CEO and took the break from the company. After he gapped the firm because he found himself as useless in a position of CEO, he started giving time on his interest and found a computer company called ‘NeXT’. After this founding, he became motivated and rejoined the previous company in 1997 from where he led the Apple company to a great success. It is one of the reasons I agree it is better to be jobless instead of becoming burden to the position.
The perseverance without success is believed to be a waste of time. Obviously, no one can conquer the peak without being jolly or relishing on the goal-oriented work. For instance, in 2016, the cofounder of ‘The Huffington Post’, Arianna Huffington stepped down herself to editor-in-chief (a simple post) thinking that it is a waste of time to hold the position as she found herself not to be cheerful towards the position due to her health and well-being. After that she started vocal advocacy for the importance of self-care and work-life balance and later became one of the successful vocal advocates. If she remains in position, she will not become an excellent advocate, so another reason to resign from boring job is to save time and give such a valuable time to other interest.
In conclusion, rather than being unproductive at the occupation, it is far good to remain isolated from it because if some activity is done without contenting or without appreciating it, this is a bootless errand as well as make him or her a person with lack of motivation. If they leave the job and focus on their interest, they become successful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1820.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81481481481 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82744708917 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534391534392 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.9071131182 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.333333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53333333333 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167961525663 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625577631281 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572878113235 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121713175154 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503390616197 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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