Buying new things has too much importance In modern society. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
It is often said today that purchasing new items has too much significance in human's life. I very much agree that society in this era is affected by shopping activities a lot. Firstly, in economic terms, procurement is an activity thal not only solves the needs of customers but also motivates businesses to continue operating and create products for people to buy, use, and consume. If no one buys anything or buys ass, econom revenue will be reduced, in addition, people not only purchase but also scloct and products consumption leads to quality comparison co spac he | between brands’ products. This helps promote businesses to continuously innovate and develop their products settes for the sociaty. Secondly, for consumers, buying new things is as a reward themse ves that helps them to enjoy Iife as well as make I feel more comfortable. pleasurable and convenient. Like printers, vacuum Cleaners, dishwashers, etc. can automatically help them complete the job without wasting time so they can de save time for other more important work. Basides, the requirements for fashion and appliance of people are becoming more and more strict. They want their items to be both beautify and impressive but also work wol. Therefore, shopping with them Is very important to satisfy public desires.
In conclusion, the practice plays an important role for both businesses and human needs. Therefore, | agree with the statement that shopping has become too important in modem society
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...no one buys anything or buys ass, econom revenue will be reduced, in addition, pe...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Pleasurable
...s well as make I feel more comfortable. pleasurable and convenient. Like printers, vacuum C...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as to, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1239.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18410041841 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78983858405 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65690376569 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.1435055825 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0714285714 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212820047347 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719502682983 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0870754899628 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195137229243 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326958987726 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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