The gap between the rich and the poor is becoming wider; the rich is becoming richer, and the poor are getting even poorer.
Over time, it is inevitable that the gap between high-wage and low-wage class is becoming more and more obvious, the top-earned people is richer and richer, while people get paid the standard amount of salary are suffered even harder than in the past. However, if we deep dive enough, the causes of this horrendous phenomena are much more complex and involving different nuances than we thought.
The first reason is investment, while the poor class struggle to keep their belly warm day by day, the rich class who have no worries about finance, begin to invest their pennies into different aspects of life. They pour tons of money into the next generations’ education, not only physical but mental health also, trade market, stock market, real estate, etc. As the time gone by, the high class has conquered all over various industries with their huge advantages in all aspects of life, left the poor with limited resources, not fully equipped now have no choice but work for the higher class. The second reason is inheritance, the rich fathers give their children all access to their kingdom after death, from generation to generation, like the snowball effect, their assets become unfathomable.
In order to balance the society and bridge the gap between the rich and the poor, government should be the pioneer to solve this dilemma. Maybe increasing the tax on inheritances, coming up with a law to protect the workers from being exploited. Another idea is investing in public school, by enhancing awareness and broadening the knowledge of the youth in general and children who have been in inferior situations in particular, there’s higher chance they will be the next middle income and millionaires, even billionaires and bridge the gap between different classes right now.
Overall, the huge gap between the rich and the poor could not be avoided and over the time, it will become harmful for an equal and balance society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ul for an equal and balance society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, while, in general, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04968944099 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52071392433 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605590062112 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.3896016198 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.6 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.2 20.7667163134 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26406089327 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097975424729 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0958612128276 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169183625108 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693521900788 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.