In some parts of the world traditional festivals and celebrations have disappeared or are disappearing. What problems is this causing? What measures could be taken to counter this situation?
In many nations of the world, traditional rituals and ceremonies have already vanished or are gradually vanishing. There are several problems and considerable solutions for this phenomenon, which I will elaborate more below.
Regarding the problems, the era of globalization has brought young generation to experience modern cultural ways of living that inflict the loss of nation identity. It is true that young people spend much money on mimicking how their international idols dress up, even paying hundred dollars for their concern ticket. So that, they are craving on foreign festivals to national ones such as Ondel-Ondel Perfomance, Indonesia. Furthermore, if the lack of youth awareness continuously arises, this will bring the huge fear of the country's legacy. Without a sense of love for the homeland, the worst possibility is that local customs has simply claimed by outsiders.
Conversely, this view might show some solutions that the role of elderlies to inherit folk customs is extremely crucial, in which they could foster youngsters to preserve cultural performance. In connection with motivating young generation, some start to instill customaries and highlight their own traditions from the earlier age. In addition, should the government invest more in the tourism sector, the existence of cultural heritage and historical site will securely be maintained. Aside from boosting national revenue, those sorts of authentic festivals can be promoted and approved by international community. For example, Italy is one of the biggest countries conserving tourism heritage, in which most of worldwide visitors put this nation on their top traveling list.
In conclusion, the disappearance of cultural problems amongst today’s societies may include the lack of impressionable youth and concern on native customs. Meanwhile, the reasonable solutions are considered to be inspiring young people as well as investing to cultural heritage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 277, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...ternational idols dress up, even paying hundred dollars for their concern ticket. So th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, furthermore, if, may, regarding, so, still, then, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65986394558 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00528634771 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65306122449 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.5473303757 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 118.857142857 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150377054471 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464317762728 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336136745088 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0923263748483 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403772070644 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.59 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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