Any country should be able to sell goods to other countries without the restrictions of the government. Do you agree or disagree?
In modern civilisation, it is widely believed that commodities can be traded between nations without governmental rules. From my perspective, I completely disagree with the statement.
There are several reasons why authorities’ control is necessary for international trade. First, there would be a noticeable risk of diseases when foreign goods are transported into domestic markets. That is because when no international products are being inspected thoroughly, infected commodities like meat and fish could be imported. As a result, diseases could explode at any time, which can cost numerous citizens’ lives. Taking COVID-19 as an example, in the very first period, the fact that Chinese goods such as pork and rice are not regulated has resulted in overwhelming quantities of infected and dead cases worldwide.
Another disadvantage of the phenomenon is that an international free market could trigger fierce competition in the national market. The key rationale is that an absence of taxes and tariffs would make foreign items superior to local ones in terms of price and variety. In the long run, domestic products will not be preferable in comparison to those made overseas; therefore, if local enterprises could not produce competitive items, they would yield little profits or even go bankrupt. Consequently, the nation's economy will be outperformed and manipulated by foreign commodities.
In conclusion, I hold a firm belief that without governmental supervision, there would be many harmful influences like medical risk and the manipulation of international goods. I hope there will be more acknowledgement towards this issue in the near future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 506, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
... or even go bankrupt. Consequently, the nations economy will be outperformed and manipu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56299212598 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19525240306 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657480314961 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4812530467 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.692307692 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10340693528 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.036464583874 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0246191210818 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0658389524854 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233456735817 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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