In many nations, people in huge cities either live alone or in small family units, instead of in large, extended family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend?
Family has been a controversial topic of debate for a long time. People in metropolises prefer living alone or nuclear family to staying in an extended family. From my point of view, this trend has both positive and negative impacts on human life so I will disscuss two views of this issue in this essay.
On the one hand, one of the main reasons leading to this phenomenon is that living in one or a small family enables people to have privacy or comfort and freedom as their wishes. Individuals can be satisfied to do whatever they want without asking permission from their parents and are not affected by others. For a particular example, youngsters who stay alone have an independent life such as staying up late, watching television, and hanging out with their friends until midnight without any complaints. Besides, a person who is living in small family often experiences fewer chances of conflicts. Moreover, it is easy for two-generation families to have family bonding activities such as sharing dinner time, shopping, having trips, and picnics.
On the other hand, one-person households are more vulnerable as facing financial and health issues. Life is indeed more complex and difficult, especially because the cost of living has increased so dramatically. Without the help from other people, it would be impossible for many people to pay all living costs such as buying a car, paying a deposit, or even purchasing food. Furthermore, for some people, particularly the elderly, living alone could trigger mental illness such as depression or autism if people segregate themselves from the human connection in the long run.
To sum up, i think living solitary life or in a small family always have pros and cons. Therefore, i personally uncertain whether positive or not.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, i think, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09863945578 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89969327888 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608843537415 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2077404425 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.071428571 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263911371994 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893753624863 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673716236817 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167817252223 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070074203866 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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