Some people believe that the responsibility for the protection of the environment is by a transnational organization, rather than each individual country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In contemporary life, the problems related to the environment are a subject of debate. While it is argued that environmental conservation is the duty of an international organization, rather than each individual nation, I personally object to this notion. This essay will give some reasons for my opinion.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that a multinational organization has a responsibility to protect the environment. They can regulate and monitor activities of industries and humans which seriously affect the environment of other countries nearby such as discharging untreated industrial waste into the sea. As a result, they are more likely to come up with measures to solve the environmental problem as well as the conflict among related countries. For example, the World Wildlife Organization is founded to monitor and prevent activities which have negative impacts on the international environment, especially climate change and greenhouse effect.
On the other hand, the responsibility for the environmental protection of each individual country is more crucial due to some reasons. First, nations can know about their own environmental problems as well as their impacts on their inhabitants earlier than a transnational organization. Consequently, they possibly solve these problems promptly before affecting too seriously on ecology and other countries. For instance, the government in Vietnam has imposed factories incorrecting the waste disposal and polluting air on heavy fines to prevent them from contaminating the environment which has detrimental effects on people’s physical health and native species. Second, each country raises their own people ‘s awareness about environmental threats through local government. As a result, more and more people are more likely to have a better insight about problems related to the environment which they can cause by daily activities.
To sum up, while others argue that the responsibility of a transnational organization for protecting the environment is more important than each individual country, I disagree this notion because each country can resolve its own environmental problems and raise citizens’ awareness more easier.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 283, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
... problems and raise citizens’ awareness more easier.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, second, so, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1881.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.73475609756 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31749767504 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533536585366 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 595.8 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6260769185 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.357142857 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92857142857 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260279877264 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936837401588 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838809797032 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179537150271 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682838327126 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.25 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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