Music
What are the reasons that justify the fact that music makes people feel good?
Music is the language of the heart without words. Music has a powerful influence on human being. It makes people feel lively and happy. Recently research has shown that 43,000 people listen to music per hour around the world. Additionally, one good thing about music, when it hits you, you feel no pain.
My point of view, it makes people feel better for some reasons.
Music is life itself. It causes that you can alter your mood. It can diminish your anxiety, stress, insomnia and it can multiple your mood, boost your memory, and make your mind free of bad things that occurred recently. “ without music “ life would be a mistake, said Selena Gomez. When you are sad your best friend forever is music listening to different songs from different singers and hollow your body of any kind of pain and suffering. In addition when you are listening to music you can not feel solitary.
Moreover, where words fail, music speaks. When you are mad at yourself and people who live around you, your best medicine is music. On the other hand, your spirit needs music and at least you should listen two music per day. When you want to see your dreams and things that are going to happen to you many years later, so you need to listen to the soothe music. Or if you want to be more innovative during your work, you need to listen to Mozart. It does magic. There are many kinds of music in different moods that people need it. It is a proverb that says, “No music no life”.
In a word, music has lots of good influences on people’s life. Music has different parts in different moods. And there are lots of proverb that singers said, “ No music no life”. Music makes people peppier for above reasons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, at least, in addition, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 323.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5572755418 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.0358620891 2.67179642975 76% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50773993808 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0520956395 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.88 100.406767564 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.92 20.6045352989 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.68 5.45110844103 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.450561418289 0.236089414692 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.197969723148 0.076458572812 259% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128876977315 0.0737576698707 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.279530594928 0.150856017488 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146727955513 0.0645574589148 227% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 11.7677419355 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 58.1214874552 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 10.1575268817 43% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.28 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.28 8.01818996416 78% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 86.8835125448 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 10.002688172 40% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.