Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both schools and parents are responsible for solving this problem. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
It is sometimes argued that in this modern era, the youth's harmful lifestyle is the issue that belongs to both schools and parents' obligation to deal with. From my perspective,I partly agree that the ways parents and schools bear a hand in this aspect in essentially required.
On the one hand,it is undoubtedly true that parents is the only factor that set the foundation of children's lifestyles. During the infancy, parents are the one who teach their offsprings to survive in this world. Besides, immaturity allows children to accept those lessons effortlessly. Therefore, children's healthy ways of life is affected by their parents to a certain degree. School are also told to emerge in this problem. Some school offer their students such unnutritious meals. On top of that, some schools and academies are undeniably abandoning promoting students' physical health. Organising more physical education and extracurricular activities is indispensable for teenagers' growth. In fact, parents and schools' orientation is a must for children's ways of life.
On the other hand, the children themselves must be responsible for their lives as well, especially with the adolescents. Investing too much time and effort on just sitting day by day exceedingly concentrating on studying directly affect children's physical and mental health. In addition, a meal with high fat foods must be taken into consideration. Consuming an extravagant amount of junk food and meat without any vegetables is witnessed in many teenagers. According to a survey in the USA in 2020, there is merely 40 percent of American kids are aerobically fit. Having a healthy lifestyle from a young age has permanant benefits in the distant future.
In conclusion, I do believe that although schools and parents is said to be responsible for children's lifestyle, kid's consciousness about themselves must also be taken into account.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, so, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01893285045 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596666666667 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5673268536 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5555555556 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322596660578 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872147913946 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602056407663 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181794312648 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445342059909 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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