Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.
As Plato said, "Necessity is the mother of all inventions". In today's ever-evolving globe, technology has taken the centre stage as the hallmark of evolution. For every small inconvenience that we face in our daily lives, there is some gadget out there that can solve our problem and make our lives simpler.
To put it bluntly, technology has managed to increase our efficiency by many many times. From a simple process like gift wrapping to solving complex mathematical equations, machines have surpassed human efficiency in all spheres of life. A mother will take 10 mins to prepare a lunch whereas a robot can do that job in a mere 2-4 mins, leaving the mom to focus on more important tasks. Airplanes and trains have made travel so much safer and easier. From a young kid to an old aged man, anyone can use these with just a simple purchase of a ticket sitting at home. Planes offer us reduced travel time, while trains offer us increased comfort as compared to traditional buses and cars. Traveling in a car, someone going to a meeting can easily finish their work instead of wasting that crucial time driving a car.
Technology has not only helped simplify our lives but has led to major scientific breakthroughs as well. From space to medicine, humans are making progress in leaps. Diseases like Covid-19 didn't claim as many lives as they could have 10 years ago mainly due to the existence of various medical technologies which helped speed up the process of creation of preventive vaccines as well as mild medicines. The discovery of solar panels and wind turbines has managed to reduce the stress on the earth's resources as well as led to a significant reduction in pollution and global warming. Machine learning models exist all around us and help make our lives run smoothly without even giving a hint of their existence. From tube lights that switch on automatically to cars that can drive themselves, we have a long way as far as technology is concerned and it doesn't seem like it going to slow down any time soon.
There is no denying that technology doesn't have its fair share of issues. Two primary problems the world faces today are, how to prevent the misuse of technology and how to make it simpler to cater to the needs of all countries and age groups. Old people find it difficult to even operate simple 21st-century mobile phones because of the excess features that have been put on them. Ethical dilemmas in using new technology have also become a major issue. The use of biotechnology in causing mass genocides and performing illegal experiments on people and animals alike has led to a major uproar in lots of countries all across the globe.
There is a lot of complexity in how technology continues to pervade our lives. But, quite often, technology itself offers new solutions to our problems. But technology is merely a tool. So long as we are more responsible, it can be used to improve the quality of life of billions of people.
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Suggestion: many
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Suggestion: goes
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, whereas, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 58.6224719101 130% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2467.0 2235.4752809 110% => OK
No of words: 517.0 442.535393258 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77176015474 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76839952204 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68321827155 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 300.0 215.323595506 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580270793037 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 795.6 704.065955056 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5550244568 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.68 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.68 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.04 5.21951772744 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261116863709 0.243740707755 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683987008621 0.0831039109588 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894254253533 0.0758088955206 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149204375499 0.150359130593 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786428623946 0.0667264976115 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 100.480337079 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.