Some people think the government funding should not be used for supporting art and culture, while others think supporting cultural activities may be beneficial for the population and the culture. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Government funding has always been a controversial topic for generations. Many people think that they should spend money on cultural activities, whereas others argue that it should be used to solve the country’s problems. I believe that the government should invest in citizens and infrastructure and I will explain my opinion below.
On the one hand, cultural activities play a vital role in people’s lives. Some traditional occasions such as Tet holiday or Christmas are good opportunities for people to gather with their families. For example, young people working abroad can enjoy and celebrate these holidays in other countries and also can come back to their countries and celebrate them with their families. It strengthens the sense of family and community. Besides, thanks to technology, the government can choose to widen their country’s culture to foreigners which can help them get a deeper understanding of their countries.
On the other hand, many people think that it is unnecessary to invest in cultural activities because there are some more serious issues to address. Using money for the construction of new roads is a better way, in the fact that, the deterioration of transport infrastructure in many cities has become the major reason for the increasing number of traffic accidents. In addition, national leaders should support scientists in developing sustainable sources of electronics that will be used in their countries in the future.
In conclusion, in my view, even though there are still many benefits to this idea, the disadvantages outweigh the advantages. So, I still believe that the government should spend their funds on social problems rather than paying for cultural activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, so, still, then, whereas, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38376383764 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99123413526 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575645756458 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0706217701 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.230769231 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3846153846 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336862518489 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111046917132 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715748630587 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205725964922 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067787244205 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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