The internet has transformed lives and economies but it is turning the world into a global village. Soon everybody will think and behave in the same way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is undeniable that human most advanced technology ever invented is the internet. It has abilities to connect people from various even remote places in the world. This mobilization has positively effected the live and economy of the citizens. However, it also rises a jargon "global citizen" which some people claim to make everyone around the globe to produce similar thoughts and behaviours. Considering the massive impacts it gave for the society nowadayas, I could not agree more to this notion.
One of the most current and controversial phenomenon is the same-sex marriage. It is even now starting to be legalized in several cities of Indonesia. This is a breakthrough in the society that gain both support and rejection from many people. There are even homongous numbers of LGBTQ plus communities running underground. Looking into how contrast this behaviour with the existing norms in countries especially in Indonesia, one of the possible answer of how this happen is the internet and the way it changes perception around the world. Allowing this issue to happen stemmed from western ideologies that prioritize freedom above all. It is a perfect illustrations that internet started to form human ideas into a single similar pattern.
Furthermore, internet ensure its users to interact anonymously without having tangibale guidelines. At one point, this might be beneficial since one can freely shares ideas and opinions. However, the ideas one put into writing or videos in online form could be easily adopted by people and used as their own. This is the reason why a rapper from Indonesia names Rich Brian mentioned in his songs about more copycats and less people sounds original. The easy access of tremendous sources of information results in people's inability to develop themselves.
In conclusion, we, as a human, must be able to accept the fact that internet plays role in craving similar point of views and habits into human life. With the appropriate filter we put on ourselves, this could reduce the damage it cause and improve originality.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 655, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'illustration'?
Suggestion: illustration
...tize freedom above all. It is a perfect illustrations that internet started to form human ide...
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Line 5, column 161, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'share'
Suggestion: share
...ight be beneficial since one can freely shares ideas and opinions. However, the ideas ...
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Line 5, column 421, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ed in his songs about more copycats and less people sounds original. The easy access...
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Line 7, column 232, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
Suggestion: causes
...selves, this could reduce the damage it cause and improve originality.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, look, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21194029851 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79477601977 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617910447761 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2239373406 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8947368421 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6315789474 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.89473684211 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150098549466 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421945761046 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040298486821 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0874091063076 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325114419656 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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