Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic, social and commercial perspectives.
What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?
Currently, young people are suffering a number of pressures from not only their parents in school achievements, but society and business as well. There are several reasons for these trends and solutions to the issue should be raised to reduce its negative effects.
To begin with, there are a few elements why children are now under big pressures. The first factor to be mentioned here is their parents. As almost all people are usually proud of their offspring’s success in life so that they could obtain important positions at work in future. As a result, they have to study hard at school to acquire distinguished academic performances, which may serve them effectively later. Additionally, some children who come from famous families are expected to keep their families’ history for the next generation. Referring to commerce, children are forced to consume goods to compete with their peers so that they could expose their level.
However, parents should relieve their force by paying attention to their children both spirits and talents as some of them might not have abilities in academic performances but they own special abilities in other fields such as arts, sports or music. Knowing their children’s interests and hobbies would orientate them to a right way accordance to the talents they are holding. Another way is to control advertising activities in the media order to restrict companies who target children to sell their products.
In conclusion, although some negative pressures on children can be identified, possible measures are currently taken to decline such difficulties.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... raised to reduce its negative effects. To begin with, there are a few elements ...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ould obtain important positions at work in future. As a result, they have to study hard a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29411764706 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8021906079 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635294117647 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9509669973 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15457445742 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566633219492 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545618162058 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118891937858 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682730521261 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.