Modern societies need specialists in certain fields, but not in others.
Some people therefore think that governments should pay university fees for students who study subjects that are needed by society. Those who choose to study less relevant subjects should not receive government funding.
Would the advantages of such an educational policy outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowaday, modern societies need specialists in certain field. Many people therefore belive that goverments should pay university fees for teenagers who learn subjects that are demanded by society, but those who choose to study less significant subject should not get government funding. In my opinion, this view have benefits and drawback with each person and each situation. The following essay will analyse this satement in detail.
On the one hand, government will be more concentrate to invest in students who study subjects that are need by their society, following that the quality teenagers who learn this subjects will be improve significantly. this trend will help the individual's life will be better than before and also the social, their country will be developed through a day. For instance, in medical education which is very necessary in our life. When goverment concentrate in medical then people's health can improve gradually. Furthermore, government can also train a large enough number quanity of undergrad for supporting the demand of individuals. Making an environment for teenagers have opportunity to compete and striving with each other, these is the motivation of each children for improving themselves.
On the other hand, that trend is not fair with students who choose to study less relevant subjects. They can see the bias of goverment to students who study subjects that are needed by society, that can make them bored, tired and stress then leave their learing. It may lead terrible influence to the social. Moreover, the subjects that are needed by society will become the trend and also these have goveverment support about university fees then all of teenagers will choose that subject for learning and trainning. it will make imbalance in the social, losing the staff at other fields. For example, when individuals can see the advandtage of these subject, so they do not have any reason to let their son or their daughter in other fields and they do not care about their children felling. In addition, a plent of undergrad who study subjects that are needed by society will make a compete, in that students who have less abiliti than other will be the loser. The social where have a lot of unemployments and homeless people.
To conclude, governments pay university fees for students who study subjects that are needed by society and Those who choose to study less relevant subjects do not receive government funding is have these advantage and drawback appropriate with each person, so government need to have bright plan to help their young generation better than before for improving the development of their nation by teenager's contribution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 7.85571142285 280% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 26.0 7.30460921844 356% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2247.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 435.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16551724138 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66436087391 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452873563218 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 686.7 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.2624517437 49.4020404114 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.263157895 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8947368421 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15789473684 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.452051443733 0.244688304435 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140120997947 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150862225257 0.0667982634062 226% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.339302048541 0.151304729494 224% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11535549501 0.056905535591 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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