In many countries, the governments likes to spend more money on the arts. Some people agree with this. However, others think government should spend more on health and education.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
In many countries, governments allocate funds to support the arts community. Although some individuals believe that this is an excellent idea, others argue that the government should use its resources on education and health instead. This essay will discuss both sides before presenting my opinion.
On one hand, investing in the arts can bring about several benefits. First and foremost, it supports local artists and musicians, providing them with a platform to showcase their talents. This not only boosts the morale of the artists themselves but also helps promote a country's cultural diversity. Furthermore, the arts industry creates employment opportunities, contributing significantly to the economy. Lastly, funding for the arts can attract tourism, generating revenue that can be used to improve other sectors such as education and healthcare.
On the other hand, there are those who believe that government spending should focus on health and education. Providing quality education and healthcare systems is critical to the well-being of any society. Adequate education equips future generations with the skills they need to contribute positively to the workforce and economy. Similarly, investing in healthcare ensures that citizens have access to affordable medical care and facilities, thus leading to longer, healthier lives.
In my opinion, while I agree that the government should invest in health and education, I firmly believe that supporting the arts community is equally important. The arts play a crucial role in shaping society's culture, promoting creativity, and fostering unity. Additionally, by supporting the arts industry, governments can also create meaningful job opportunities and boost the economy. However, this does not mean that funding for healthcare or education should be neglected. Instead, governments should aim to achieve a balance and allocate funds accordingly.
In conclusion, while some people may argue that government spending should prioritize health and education, I believe that investing in the arts can bring about significant advantages as well. Therefore, governments should strive to find a balance between these different sectors when allocating their funds.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 318, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'arts'' or 'art's'?
Suggestion: arts'; art's
...ys cultural diversity. Furthermore, the arts industry creates employment opportuniti...
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Line 7, column 296, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'arts'' or 'art's'?
Suggestion: arts'; art's
... unity. Additionally, by supporting the arts industry, governments can also create m...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, lastly, may, similarly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1900.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.79268292683 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9654966088 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591463414634 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1127512241 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2631578947 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319364271244 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925801471689 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694670805024 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186140478516 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726237794246 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.01 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 318, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'arts'' or 'art's'?
Suggestion: arts'; art's
...ys cultural diversity. Furthermore, the arts industry creates employment opportuniti...
^^^^
Line 7, column 296, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'arts'' or 'art's'?
Suggestion: arts'; art's
... unity. Additionally, by supporting the arts industry, governments can also create m...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, lastly, may, similarly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1900.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.79268292683 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9654966088 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591463414634 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1127512241 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2631578947 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319364271244 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925801471689 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694670805024 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186140478516 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726237794246 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.01 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.