Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people think that experts, such as who work in medical field or technical industry should be forced to work in the country where they were trained but others argue that they can work in anywhere they want. This point of view bring both benefit and drawbacks in my opinion, free to work should be encouraged.
Working in other countries can create several disadvantages. Firstly, the different in language and culture can become a significant barriers. In some industries such as technology, health care, workers are required to make exactly decisions. If misunderstanding is occurred by communication process, the wrong decisions can lead to the worst resultss. secondly, the development of many country can be slower because of lacking experts. many experts in many developing country can go to the overseas to find a new well-paid jobs which result in the lack of qualified workers in the domestic labor market.
On the other hands, encouraging professional to work in their ideal place bring many benefits. To begin with, experts can leverage the positive influences of globalization. Globalization offers experts more chance to work in good quality working spaces along with higher income. Additionally, experts can improve their skills easily by working in developed countries. Experts can learn how to solve difficult case with the supporting of other experts and modern equipments. Moreover working in another country make it easy to support each others among countries. For example, some qualified doctors choose working in Africa countries to help them upgrade their medical systems.
To conclude, encouraging experts opt to work in the ideal place can bring more benefits than drawbacks. Therefore they should be free to choose where they want to work.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 133, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'barrier'?
Suggestion: barrier
...ge and culture can become a significant barriers. In some industries such as technology,...
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Line 2, column 353, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
...cisions can lead to the worst resultss. secondly, the development of many country can be...
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Line 2, column 437, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Many
...n be slower because of lacking experts. many experts in many developing country can ...
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Line 2, column 524, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'job'?
Suggestion: job
...to the overseas to find a new well-paid jobs which result in the lack of qualified w...
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Line 3, column 474, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...of other experts and modern equipments. Moreover working in another country make it easy...
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Line 3, column 606, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to work'.
Suggestion: to work
... example, some qualified doctors choose working in Africa countries to help them upgrad...
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Line 4, column 104, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...can bring more benefits than drawbacks. Therefore they should be free to choose where the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3024911032 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82010451056 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5871886121 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3057823861 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6470588235 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5294117647 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.82352941176 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370867137332 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121790796315 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128616536619 0.0667982634062 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263224299108 0.151304729494 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141483871874 0.056905535591 249% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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