People are responsible for their happiness. Others feel happiness depends on other factors in their life. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
In contemporary settings, there exist numerous ways in which people all over the world conceptualize happiness. While some assume that individuals decide their happiness by themselves, others suggest that happiness is attributable to a variety of other factors. From my perspective, I am in favor of the former viewpoint, but both opinions will be discussed in the following essay.
On the one hand, it is opined that there are some driving forces other than people themselves that contribute to the happiness of citizens. Firstly, the most noteworthy factor is luck. As people are unable to predict exactly their future, various deviations are likely to appear to prevent them from reaching their desires. Even when they have prepared in advance, humans are not prodigious enough to improvise all of the astonishing happenstances. In addition, the chance that people can live happily is partly influenced by their material possession. Since citizens are living in a money-respected world, some believe that the ability to afford a host of bills and spend time on luxurious entertainment is more than adequate to be satisfied in today's lives.
On the other hand, I hold a firm belief that individuals are the authors of their own lives. Irrefutably, it is widely acknowledged that people's lives are the outcomes of their previous choices in thousands of situations throughout their lives. Therefore, should citizens be aware of this fact and wise enough to make the right decisions, they will be able to find and achieve the 'happiness' that they want. More than that, human beings possess an extraordinary characteristic that can lead them to their desired satisfaction, which is their determination. Having withdrawn tons of lessons from their forebears, people all know that once they are undaunted when facing obstacles in their lives and try their best to overcome those, it is highly likely that they can achieve their goals, thereby living happily in their own way. Therefore, people ought to understand that they are responsible for their own happiness.
To summarize, it is true that there are multifarious paths that lead citizens to their dreamt happiness. However, I strongly believe that whether or not people can live a life of contentment is entirely dependent on themselves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 412, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... are not prodigious enough to improvise all of the astonishing happenstances. In addition,...
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Line 7, column 139, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...iness. However, I strongly believe that whether or not people can live a life of contentment i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, while, in addition, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 21.0 7.30460921844 287% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 54.0 24.0651302605 224% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1930.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24456521739 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92824856361 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540760869565 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.503629515 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.529411765 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6470588235 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76470588235 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354086137301 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108106979658 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749129787421 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209848732007 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618454565525 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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