Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor.
Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
With the healthcare facilities growing expensive by the day, a number of people nowdays resort to alternate medications and treatements rather than investing in proper medical facilities. This trend has created various posetives to the healthcare system itself, while also accounting for plethora of issues for the ill.
Seeking alternative medication for minor medical issues has an economic benefits to both the people and the government. For common diseases, including common cold, diarrhoea, flu, migranes, et cetera, medications which are proven to be effective are readily available throughout the globe, along with some useful home remedies, relatively cheaper than consulting a certified medical professional. Moreover, with lesser people visiting the hospital for minor medical altercations, the hospital facilities will be less exploited, making service easier for terminal cases in the hospital. This leads to the government saving the nation al economy, with lesser expensive tests administered. The reduction in the medical expenditure in Nepal, after promoting indendent clinical and medical consulting services, followed by a decline in the death rates in the same year perfectly exemplifies the impacts of alternative medications.
On the other hand, tendency of people seeking shortcuts to cut costs involved in visiting a medical professional leads to misdiagnosis, while leading to death in some cases. Often rare, but sometimes people suffering for terminal issues overlook their symptoms, leading to congestion of medicines toxic for their conditions. Cases like HIV/AIDS and Corona Virus can easily be misdiagnosed as fever or common cold, which if not diagnosed by a doctor can lead to gruesome consequences. The fatal plague caused by Corona virus in 2020’s can be taken as an example of how alternative medications, through bring an initial relief, do no necessarily eradicate the problem itself.
Taking both sides into consideration, reducing the number of visits to a doctor for common illnesses has a posetive impact on the economy, while sometimes leads to fatal issues caused by misdiagnosis and ingestion of improper medication. Though few in number, the cons outweights the pros for the issues, as in my opinion the negative developments issued with the arguem has a fatal effect on people’s lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, while, in my opinion, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1994.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61690140845 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98867265741 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580281690141 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 634.5 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.0794460876 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.384615385 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3076923077 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16724873132 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633420387971 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376032355166 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10821343328 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0201310630269 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.76 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 78.4519038076 166% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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