As parts of education, students should spend a period of time living in another country to learn its language and culture. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is thoutht that as parts of education, a period of time living in another nation should be spent by adolesence to study its language and culture. From my point of view, i mostly agree with this statement because its benefits for the resident life. The following essay will analyse this statement in detail.
First of all, in the industrialized world and with the appearence of modern technology that numerous individuals has been replaced by new innovation such as automatic robots, so international training is greatly significant for the society. Not only will this phenomenon provide various academic knowledge, social experience and historical traditional which was passed on by native speaker, but also more quality relationship can be created such as international friends or aboad students who have positive affection for their improvement. Furthermore, the propotion of umemployment and homeless people in their nation will be reduce gradually which advance the economic background. To illustrate, there was a vurvey, the famous interviewer and professor, which is expert about the success of postgraduates who had studied over sea. The statistic demonstrated that nearly everyone has got plenty of achievement in their career.
However, we can not negate the drawback of this problem for the people life. The different of culture will lead some unneccessary conflict and controversial and also socioeconomic will be widened where just wealthy and talent teenagers have opportunity to study aboad. Moreover, many managers take advantage from this investment for their own revenue, harmful influence will be led by this action to the young generations.
To conclude, though my agrument from the essay, i totally agree with this statement, but it still have some negative aspect fot the society. The government need to have clear plans to improve their citizens for the development of their country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...s thoutht that as parts of education, a period of time living in another nation should be spen...
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...ill analyse this statement in detail. First of all, in the industrialized worl...
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Message: Use simply 'innovation'.
Suggestion: innovation
...merous individuals has been replaced by new innovation such as automatic robots, so internatio...
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...lenty of achievement in their career. However, we can not negate the drawback ...
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...this action to the young generations. To conclude, though my agrument from the...
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Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...agree with this statement, but it still have some negative aspect fot the society. T...
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... The government need to have clear plans to improve their citizens for the develo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41610738255 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97938958648 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634228187919 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.9800264691 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.153846154 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.082142474704 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0325788020297 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767304079607 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0629735881752 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.083807723079 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.