Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish.
Currently，more and more people who are good at certain area should get a job in the nation where they got education from. By contrast，some people disagree with that and they think the experts are free to choose the desirable jobs in different area. Although it would make a difference to local economy working in the country where they gain knowledge，I still lean towards the latter.
It is a kind of justify to favour the idea that professionals should work in the country where they get their training and skills. One biggest reason might be that they are input a lot of resources from school and well instructed to be inspired the potential. What is more，the local government provides the libraries to them where there are a large number of books in professional fields. In return，they have to stay in that country to make contributions.
While it is also true that professionals are allowed to get jobs in
anywhere they want. The most important reason is that if those professionals go to a developing country where many local industries are just at the initial development，the economy there would grow rapidly and people in that nation would have better living quality. The professionals can use their skill to help companies producing their goods with higher efficiency and even create new products high-tech. As a result，more and more people will buy their products and use them which is more useful than usual. Besides，some areas short of infrastructure，and engineers，for instance，can aid them with constructing roads，railway lines and buildings
To sum up，I believe that both sides of the argument are reasonable. On balance，my firm opinion is that restrictions should not be imposed on professionals’ working positions. For one thing，more people would living better and countries’ economy could be improved with the aid of those people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 250, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e the desirable jobs in different area. Although it would make a difference to local eco...
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Line 2, column 341, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...s the libraries to them where there are a large number of books in professional fields. In return...
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Line 2, column 456, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in that country to make contributions. While it is also true that professionals...
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Line 2, column 456, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... in that country to make contributions. While it is also true that professionals are ...
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Line 6, column 208, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'live'
Suggestion: live
...itions. For one thing，more people would living better and countries’ economy could be ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, still, well, while, for instance, kind of, as a result, for one thing, to sum up, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32451500222 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563333333333 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5913417056 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.571428571 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377439178089 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130044796245 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831077121275 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196882198931 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111191673174 0.056905535591 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.