What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in a number of different places during your childhood years?
It is believed that relocation in childhood time would have both merits and demerits. In this essay, I will discuss both of these notions.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why living in different places in childhood years has a positive impact on children’s development. Firstly, moving to new locations challenges children’s adaptability ability which would become a profound background for them in the future. This challenge may bring more difficulties for them in the integration process but from these experiences, children can learn how to overcome obstacles, find solutions to problems and importantly, they become more open to experiences. Secondly, a frequent relocation opens up more valuable opportunities in advancing children’s language skills. By accessing many different languages, it stimulates their languages and encourages them to become a bilingual or multilingual person that may become one of the competitive advantages for them in studying and advancing in their career path in the future.
On the other hand, immigrating living areas frequently could disturb children’s development for some reasons. First and foremost, changing residences can have a negative effect on children’s emotions. By living in a strange environment, children easily feel lonely, especially in making friends or opening their relationships. Secondly, educational interruptions are one of the biggest concerns in children’s accessing knowledge. This is because changing school or educational systems could lead to gaps in learning which make students facing difficulties in catching up the new curriculum. As a result, their studying performance could be affected dramatically that can bring them more distress. For example, students in Vietnam who migrate with families to settle down in America often study their study grade again to keep up with America's educational knowledge.
In conclusion, although there are a plethora of benefits of shifting places during childhood as it opens up children' minds or their language skills, this tendency also has more disadvantages in children’s advancement.
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...sadvantages in children’s advancement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1819.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.738170347 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20809797933 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574132492114 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8386564627 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.266666667 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1333333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113082190981 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0398779570298 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692696146258 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0762703885547 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479048017162 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.01 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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