Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their country. What are the reasons? Solutions to change negative attitudes?
These days, it's not a good thing for international travellers to come to the country. This essay will outline a number of reasons for this trend and a number of possible solutions to help tackle the issue.
On the one hand, tourists accidentally cause an environmental impact. Numerous international tourists visit the country, which poses a threat to natural resources and the ecosystem. Some travellers discharge garbage into the river, and littering in the wrong place will wreck the environment. According to a recent survey, the amount of trash is increasing dramatically in tourist attractions, which shows that the ecosystem is seriously endangered. Additionally, the country is susceptible to a pandemic. Even though the tourists do not know about the virus, it will be easy for them to infect each other. Coronavirus stems from China, for example, and the Chinese population did not know they were infected, so they travelled around the world, influencing not only this country but also all the citizens.
On the other hand, the government should implement a policy to tackle these issues. By having a banner at some of the tourist attractions, we will pick up more visitors and minimise garbage impact on the environment. The local authorities take on an important role, so they also penalise cases that violate fundamental rules as a warning. On top of that, there should be health checks at the security gate. Although it costs a lot of money, it will reduce the number of infectious people. For instance, the local authorities should invest in technology to minimise the time spent checking at security and not affect tourists.
In conclusion, there are main contributors to the problem, and several measures are suggested to put an end to the situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
These days, its not a good thing for international trav...
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Line 5, column 107, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...kle these issues. By having a banner at some of the tourist attractions, we will pick up mo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1275862069 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92836592517 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593103448276 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7661130646 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9375 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0923057038183 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0286783830978 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401162947952 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0584799262418 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623513187279 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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