In this ever-changing world, there is no denying that travel is a major source of revenue for many countries around the world. Visiting a new location has a number of negative effects on the neighborhood if it is handled improperly, but I would contend that there are more advantages for a variety of reasons that I will go into in the subsequent paragraphs.
Keep an eye on the bright side, commuting to a destination is advantageous for both tourists and governments. Tourism in some countries makes a good impression on foreign tourists; it therefore creates a more comprehensive outlooks on the local. As a consequence, the tourism industry virtually develops and have chances to open up job prospects in the provision of services like lodging, entertainment, and transportation. It therefore not only cuts back on the rate of unemployment but also produce an enormous source of profit, which offers them chances to show the country's economic growth potential, as well as bring more business and cultural collaborations in long terms.
Nonetheless, tourism has some detrimental effects on the environment. First and foremost, the habitat of wild animals is perhaps demolished by the construction of new infrastructure and utilities. A prime example of this matter is that businesspeople have built more hotels close to beaches and forests with a view to accommodating tourists. By virtue of this, a variety of wildlife may now be threatened or face up to serious survival risks. Furthermore, since they lack a sense of obligation to preserve these environments, there exists a minority of visitors does not aware of the importance of these activities and throw wastes away haphazardly.
From my perspectives, the merits still outweigh the demerits although the weaknesses are able to be solved with plausible solutions. Local authority should radically prohibit deforestation from transpiring and impartially fine at any individuals or organizations do not obey the law.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the benefits of tourism, such as promoting the country's image nationally, as well as increasing employment exceed the reasons for disadvantages even though it has certain negative effects on the local environment.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, may, nonetheless, so, still, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1876.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31444759207 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31489307192 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620396600567 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.1019926304 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.0 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2142857143 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64285714286 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103398850296 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.031030603042 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0258846172072 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0490365462993 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295936595429 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, may, nonetheless, so, still, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1876.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31444759207 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31489307192 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620396600567 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.1019926304 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.0 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2142857143 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64285714286 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103398850296 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.031030603042 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0258846172072 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0490365462993 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295936595429 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.