The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
In today’s fast-paced digital age, the question of whether the increasing rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves is a matter of great debate. I partially disagree with the statement that the increading rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves. Rapid speed of life make our life faster and dynamic but we need a balance between speedy life and quality life. From the ancient time to modern life the space of life is increasing day by day. It has solved a lots of problem of human civilization but also created a ample amount of distraction and problems, but as we are intelligent human civilization so we need to maintain a balance between life and speed.
First of all, increasing repaid speed of life give dynamic, innovative, wealthy, and more connected society. People can traver a thousand of miles in short period of time, which was impossible before the invention of air bus. We can communicate a distance place in a short period of time in a low cost which was almost impossible before the invention of internet. The business has been spread out all over the world very fast and innovation is skyrocketing so the society is become benefiting from the speed of the life.
I has solved a losts of problem form health issue to political issues, from educational issue to social issues. Now we live in a gloabl village where there is no border in the world and every person of the world is the citizen of the global village and different kind of discrimination has been cut down to almost zero.
Additionally, in the todays fast paced world people can earn a lost of money then before that lead to wealthy society, where no people will starve. The number of educated people is increasing day by day that help the family, society or nation to grow. Moreover, in the fast paced world the people share a common culture and tradition. The people can one corner of the world can teach and learn others side’s of the world people. The invention of internet lead our life more dynamic and comfy. In today world people don’t need to go the market instead they can order online, they can oder food form restaurant or cloud kitchen that saves a lost of time of people. People can use their extrat time to develop their self, new innovation or creative work to make the world a better place to live.
But increadin rapid speed of life is not all the good. People who are rate racing can’t focus on their health and family, so the health become fragile and family are beaking. Althou todays society are more connected with social media but overuse of social media create depression, axiety. The fast fashion become a new trand which cost a lost of money of the people, which also generate green house gase. Individuals only focus to win the space but ingor quality of life. Many people can’t maintain with space so they are left out from the society and causing many crime. The price of goods is increadin day by day and many family can’t manage food and shelter for their loved ones, there is creating a class of people who become hopeless with the fast paced world.
In conclusion, rapid space of life solves a lost of problems in our life but also crest a losts of problems. The best way to address this problem is to maintain a balace between rapid speed and quality life, then a healthy, eudcated, whelthy, and prosperous generation will grow int today’s rapid space society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 36, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
In today’s fast-paced digital age, the question of whether the increasing rapid pace of life today...
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Line 1, column 495, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...is increasing day by day. It has solved a lots of problem of human civilization but al...
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Line 1, column 497, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of problems'.
Suggestion: lots of problems
... increasing day by day. It has solved a lots of problem of human civilization but also created ...
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Line 1, column 552, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... of human civilization but also created a ample amount of distraction and problem...
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Line 3, column 157, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...can traver a thousand of miles in short period of time, which was impossible before the invent...
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Line 3, column 274, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...communicate a distance place in a short period of time in a low cost which was almost impossib...
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Line 4, column 3, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...efiting from the speed of the life. I has solved a losts of problem form health i...
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Line 6, column 102, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a lost of money then before that lead to wealthy society, where no people will st...
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Line 6, column 721, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'innovation'.
Suggestion: innovation
...heir extrat time to develop their self, new innovation or creative work to make the world a be...
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Line 8, column 63, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...eed of life is not all the good. People who are rate racing can’t focus on their health...
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Line 8, column 561, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun crime seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much crime', 'a good deal of crime'.
Suggestion: much crime; a good deal of crime
...e left out from the society and causing many crime. The price of goods is increadin day by...
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Line 10, column 170, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ess this problem is to maintain a balace between rapid speed and quality life, th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, then, in conclusion, in short, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 14.8657303371 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 85.0 58.6224719101 145% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2842.0 2235.4752809 127% => OK
No of words: 607.0 442.535393258 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68204283361 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.96360453597 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38542624142 2.79657885939 85% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 215.323595506 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.431630971993 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 902.7 704.065955056 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5258149912 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.259259259 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4814814815 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25925925926 5.21951772744 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.13820224719 234% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19407744788 0.243740707755 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643548721423 0.0831039109588 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716240761856 0.0758088955206 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105660165427 0.150359130593 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749987723649 0.0667264976115 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 100.480337079 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.