Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In recent times, the number of individuals suffering from health deteriorations are applying alternative medicines and treatments by themselves is rising at a noticeable speed. Additionally, they no longer visit their doctors for prescriptions. From my perspective, this trend toward treating illnesses by their own could pose some life-threatening effects on patients, as well as detrimental influences on the economy of residents.
On the one hand, using alternative medicines without introduction from professionals might not offer benefits to the patients. In fact, many people do not have sufficient knowledge about biology and medicines. If they insist on buying medicines or treat the health problems on their own, some hazardous chemicals in the medicines would put people at risk. By way of illustration, doctors always suggest patients using a suitable amount of antibiotic when they are suffering from infectious diseases. However, the overuse of antibiotics might result in the much worse health problem because the depletion of body's cell. In other words, patients then have to visit the doctors for emergency circumstances by the incorrect usage of such kind of treatments.
On the other hand, purchasing for a tiny number of medicines could cost a fortune and harm considerably to the economic situations of some households. As a matter of fact, when patients utilize a wide range of treatments without any health enhancement, their family must go to the pharmacy in search for other types of medicines. Therefore, the continual use of exorbitant medicines might be the major cause of the decline of households' economy. Take the example of medicines from abroad, they are much more expensive than the national ones. If patients completely believe on the effectiveness of those medicines without taking into account the impacts from a scientific perspective, they would not afford to purchase imported medicines for long-term use. As a result, more medicines with no improvement is synonymous with the shortage of money sources.
In other words, I strongly hold the view that trying alternative medicines or treatments in lieu of visiting doctors for advices might have deleterious influences on the community, namely the risk of patients' lives and the lack of financial sources in the long run.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, therefore, well, in fact, kind of, as a matter of fact, as a result, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1952.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40720221607 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08509416919 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554016620499 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8638380367 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5625 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5625 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233762758284 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768374141797 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404289985009 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149134568107 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0117471544044 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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