The surest indicator of a great nation is not the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but the general well-being of all its people.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
When a country gets stronger, when it really comes up to the stage of the globe, it is more likely to be judged by the world, and people tend to set a benchmark to judge the power of one nation. Some hold the view that the most definite indicator of a great nation is the general well-being of all its people, instead of the achievements of its rules, renowned artists, or scientists. I strongly agree with the idea in three reasons.
To begin, the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists is not exclusive, and one achievement from one country can be shared and applied to the whole world. As the trend of globalization, the communication in according field are getting closer and more dense, thus the national border of those fields are getting blurred. For instance, Elon Musk, being one of the most famous entrepreneur and any other kind of titles, created many international companies, Tesla, SpaceX for example, and also funded some technology companies worldwide. We can recognize Tesla cars on roads in many countries and SpaceX satellites providing StarLink signals for every part of the earth continent, and more and more people have applied ChatGPT in their work and life, which is also a tech funded by Musk. We cannot say that such contribution is exclusive to Elon’s motherland only, and it should be everyone on the planet to share the fortune, to have a person that boosted the tech evolution.
Also, one nation’s people made up the most part of a nation, thus people usually reflect the country’s strategy, power, resources and culture. For instance, in the past three years, the globe were suffering from the Covid pandemic, and citizen’s from different nations lived a quite different life. Some struggled to buy tissue, water, or virus-proof mask, some faced the crushed hospital system, and still some are lucky enough to have just adequate living resource. I have to admit that in the pandemic, countries are under and being test by the same enormous pressure. And in difficulties, the comparatively not so suffered people should indicate that their nation has a greater power to better control the serious situation. Those people’s life are greatly influence by the country, by how the country arrange the resource, how it react towards big events and how it balance the nation budget. Thus, the general well-being of people is the most objective mirror to the country’s power.
To sum up, it is not saying that we cannot judge the power of the country by such achievements, but those achievements is conclusive and thus cannot most objectively describe the situation. And the general well-being of the country’s people is the comprehensive receiver of the country’s nearly everything, including the achievements made by great people in all kinds of fields, thus can be the best the indicator of one nation’s power.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 836, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'reacts'?
Suggestion: reacts
...he country arrange the resource, how it react towards big events and how it balance t...
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Line 5, column 872, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'balances'?
Suggestion: balances
... it react towards big events and how it balance the nation budget. Thus, the general we...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, still, thus, well, for example, for instance, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2400.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 478.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02092050209 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79941959286 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 215.323595506 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504184100418 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 736.2 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 13.0 1.77640449438 732% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.1751258354 60.3974514979 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.176470588 118.986275619 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1176470588 23.4991977007 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35294117647 5.21951772744 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203216533167 0.243740707755 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722976564808 0.0831039109588 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711408132249 0.0758088955206 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144949444925 0.150359130593 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550428755633 0.0667264976115 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 14.1392134831 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 100.480337079 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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