Nowadays most green energy is becoming ever more prevalent in both developed and developing countries. Some argue they greatly reduce costs and are better for the environment, others believe they are a serious threat to energy security. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays most green energy has become evermore predominant in both developed and developing countries. This essay agrees that it has become a serious threat to energy security. First this essay will discuss the opinion of some people who believes that green energy reduces cost and are preferred for the environment, then others who believe that it is a serious threat to energy security.
In fact, the cost of producing green energy is less than producing non-renewable energy in both short and long terms, because the price of the construction of wind turbine station is very cheaper than the construction of gas or coal stations. Moreover, the production process of green energy is much more safer than the production process of the other kind of energy for example hazards which can occurs while operating wind turbine cannot be compared to hazards of a gas or coal power plant.
Meanwhile it is a serious threat for our environment using non-renewable energy resources, this leads to climate situation disasters because of the emetion of huge quantities of toxic gases like co and co2 as a result a temperature increase occurs in all countries in which we don’t know its consequences. Also using non-renewable energy is a non continues kind, in which sooner or later it will not be used as it will be diicult to extract this kind of energy.
In conclusion developed and developing should be the prevalent in using green energy because the other kind of energy is a real threat to our environment and also can be our motive to start replacing non-renewable power stations with green ones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 300, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'safer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: safer
...duction process of green energy is much more safer than the production process of the othe...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
... hazards of a gas or coal power plant. Meanwhile it is a serious threat for our environm...
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Line 3, column 306, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...n which we don’t know its consequences. Also using non-renewable energy is a non con...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, moreover, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98507462687 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79622792732 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496268656716 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.1298875282 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.0 106.682146367 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.5 20.7667163134 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.125 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342771688895 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17522475297 0.084324248473 208% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104030543796 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219180487936 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128700298905 0.056905535591 226% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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