Students should be required to stay in school until the age of eighteen. 'To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Support your point of view with reasons and /or examples from your own experience.
An increasing trends in today's world is the emergence of the argument that at how much age students should spend their time in schools. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the above statement with notion that student should spend time in schools up to eighteen years, using a practical approach.
At the outset, there are several arguments in the favor of my stance, the most significant one includes not only the betterment of the society but also the growth of every individual on the planet earth. Thanks to the benefits offered provided by the school experiences, one can not only attain a greater success and effectiveness but can also enhance his productivity, efficiency and quality of life with remarkable ease. Furthermore, other factors impacted by the school life are career, personal life and exposure to the universe.
Moreover, eighteen years in a child's life are very important because he is observing and analyzing his environment and the behavior of other people in his surrounding. So, school is a place where one can excel in his life, build his perspective and learn the factors like commitment, dedication and love of his country. Moreover, many other disciplines, regulations and ethics can also taken into account that a student typically learn from his school. That's why many are in favor to the above statement.
To conclude, from my perspective, the government of Australia is taking great initiative in educating its citizens against the negative impacts of the statement. Citizens are being encouraged to adhere to applicable rules and regulations related to education which can bring prosperity, productivity, efficiency and positive development of the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 274.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29197080292 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94792026628 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580291970803 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9712488501 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.818181818 104.977214359 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9090909091 20.9669160288 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 7.25397266985 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128679940464 0.242375264174 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493514309065 0.0925447433944 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470351723497 0.071462118173 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0783397271834 0.151781067708 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528752302147 0.0609392437508 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 12.6369458128 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.