Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It has become a believe among people which the professionals should work in their country. According to some it is not obligatory at all for working these people in their country. In my opinion both sides have right and it depends on the situation of the society.
On the one hand the economic of a country is so important and knowledge people who have a special career like doctors, engineers and so on notice it. If the condition is not good for work and the government does not pay attention to them, these people seek for a job in abroad that has a very good salary and security of job in future. Although it has a negative effect on the nation because the young generation immigrate to other countries and the population get adult in the source country it makes to export specialist to overseas nations that cause people who live there get familiar with the source and go there as tourist. It is a very good aspect for import of currency to the country. In addition, the markets, monuments and other historical places gain much money and the economy improve again. Hence, the economic situation plays a crucial role in that and professionals should have this right to select their job’s location.
On the other hand, the government allocate lots of money for their educations and devoted many years to breeding them to a professional person who can do its special career. Thus, it is not correct for working in the foreign country. By controlling the government on their graduated students who looking for job can create a safe atmosphere for them. Not only is makes promote the facilities of country and its infrastructure but also this cause the young generation stay at home a work side by side elderly generation. But this might have a bad aspect that is they cannot learn new things and experiment them in industry countries which have high technology. So, the government should set a good legislate for this problem.
In conclusion, both insight is correct and depends on the condition and I think the authority should set a role for their best graduates who has high mark as a job opportunity to work in another country. This rule can help the country in breeding very professional people significantly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 73, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, so, thus, as to, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1837.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 386.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75906735751 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68201288324 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476683937824 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.9104868615 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.058823529 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7058823529 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.70588235294 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222214491324 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761183635319 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596129547015 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160225093352 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453290756754 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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