Many people around the world use social media to keep in touch with other people and get the news. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The trend of using social networking sites to informed of the latest transformations and keep in touch with relatives has become prevalent in recent years. This essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of this trend before assessing whether it is beneficial or detrimental to our society.
On the one hand, alternative forms of social media have brought numerous benefits to individuals. First and foremost, social networking platforms can deliver real-time updates, encouraging swift action in response to developments. For instance, the Vietnamese government constantly announced the movements of the Yagi storm to its residents on Facebook and other social platforms. These timely updates enabled residents in coastal areas to evacuate their homes promptly, thereby ensuring their safety. Additionally, online communications on Facebook and other social applications have empowered users to maintain connections with family members, obviating the necessity for commuting. As a result, many individuals can reclaim time for leisure activities, fostering a healthier lifestyle.
Conversely, reliance on social platforms can have several harmful effects on users. First, social platforms frequently necessitate that users disclose personal information to establish accounts for communication and entertainment, leading to significant privacy concerns stemming from cybercriminal activities. For instance, many Vietnamese Facebook users reported having their accounts compromised by unknown individuals, jeopardizing their privacy. Furthermore, alternative forms of social networking sites can disseminate false information, which adversely affects inexperienced young people. For instance, the proliferation of misinformation regarding COVID-19 fatalities compelled many young individuals to encounter serious repercussions.
In conclusion, while social media has emerged as a prevalent medium for staying informed about current events and maintaining familial connections due to its substantial benefits, I contend that this trend can be detrimental, particularly to the youth. If youth are unable to discern misleading information, their comprehension of current events may be distorted, with potential ramifications for their future.
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- Although it is widely recognized that cars damage the environment their manufacture and use continue to increase Why is this the case How could this increase be controlled 90
- Many people are travelling to other countries Why Is it a positive or negative development 78
- In many countries the level of crime is increasing What do you think are the main causes of crime What can we deal with those causes 87
- Many people think modern communication technology is having some negative effects on social relationships Do you agree or disagree 75
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, first, furthermore, if, may, regarding, so, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1953.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 6.38235294118 5.12529762239 125% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33214928349 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643790849673 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.353841301 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.2 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149656751279 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507651603129 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0283478900557 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0958499704493 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284995214594 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 17.34 50.2224549098 35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.72 12.4159519038 159% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.59 8.58950901804 135% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 78.4519038076 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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